Fragrance poetry inspired by Coco Mademoiselle from Chanel.
The first time I met you was in the spring.
You were carried by a light, sunny breeze.
I tried to describe you, but I couldn’t.
You slipped by but your essence didn’t leave.
Garnished by spicy woods and white petals,
You are a single pink rose blossoming.
You’re a bygone age yet forever young.
And you’re delicately overwhelming.
I delved into this world of opposites.
You were so deep and multifaceted.
Yet so untroubled and uncomplicated.
So approachable yet beyond my reach.
So I stopped trying to figure you out.
You already knew I would be in love.
Click Here to learn more about Coco Mademoiselle from Chanel. Read Pegasus from Parfums de Marly. © TheFragranceWriter.com, 2020, except where noted otherwise. All rights reserved.
“You slipped by but your essence didn’t leave.” A beautiful line
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Thanks Cassa! If you know this scent, you know it leaves a powerful scent trail!
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It’s amazing imagining it through your words…
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Thanks you’re too kind 😀 I just write as the fragrance trail leads 😉
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👍
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Beautifully written 🙂
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Thanks, Glad you stopped by my blog 🙂
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Beautifully penned ❤️
Your descriptions created a vivid image in my head and I could almost smell the scents!
You’re a brilliant poet Jay!
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Thanks I’m honored – if you can also smell it while also sense some sort of story, I’ve done my job well!!
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You most definitely have!
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Thanks! It’s a very popular fragrance, I’m sure you’ve smelled it around!
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Yep!
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Love this and I love the perfume! This was really good Jay ☺️
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Thanks. I figure you HAVE to know this one, right?
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Indeed I do!
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‘..So I stopped trying to figure you out.
You already knew I would be in love..’
Aha! This is such a wonderful line.
Loved the poem Jay♥️
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Thanks! It is one of the most loved fragrances. I knew I just had to tie up the ending somehow, and this came to my mind!
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What a beautifully written poem , Joey. Every word shouts elegance. Well done 👍 bravo.
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Thank you Thank you *takes a bow* hope you’re doing OK! Yassy
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You are welcome , Chanel Joey !
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hahaha. Wow how many nicknames do I have now
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Joey F. F is for Frangipani.
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hahaha It’s Jay Bleu you are living in the past 🙂
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I know dude ., just pulling your leg.
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OK mango lassy don’t pull too hard!
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Beautiful essence of fragrance in each and every lines. “You slipped by but your essence didn’t leave.” This lines are really beautiful. Loved the ending too. Well written 🤩👍💯
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Thanks I love your comment! Do you know the fragrance? Do you feel it’s a good match??
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I prefer the nature’s fragrance not artificial. Yeah, it’s exactly matching the plot.
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True. You can’t beat freshly blooms flowers or the smell of trees in the woods!
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Yeah, that’s my always preference.🤩
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beautiful. . .
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I love that the stands alone completely as an enchanting woman, it makes me picture Audrey Hepburn, yet I’m sure it ties to the fragrance. Really well done 🙂 #noonionshere
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Thanks! I’m pretty sure she wore Chanel (from my minor online research, lol). Kiera Knightley was the model for Coco Madmoiselle. It is a totally enchanting, strong female fragrance. The woman that knows everyone loves her
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I like her too. 🙂 I’m certain she wore it dressed as a pirate!
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what a layer of onions that character is! upper class elite in coco mademoiselle sailing (probably dirty and sweaty) on a ship with pirates.
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That sounds like Joy. Like happiness.
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Yes. It smells like it too 😁
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Beautiful way to spray (to express)…Jay.
“So I stopped trying to figure you out. You already knew I would be in love. “
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Hahaha thanks Navin. That’s a good pun
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Wow really amazing piece Jay. Beautifully written💞
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Thanks Sanajana. I’m sure you know this one. Hope you’re doing well!
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This is so beautiful Jay
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Thanks, you are too kind 😁
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My pleasure
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Hope you’re doing well
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I’m okay, hope you are well too
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I’m doing OK, too. Hoping things improve!
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