Fragrance poetry inspired by Layton Exclusif from Parfums de Marly.

Lucid journeys to revision oneself
can begin and end with bewilderment.
So I ventured – down the brown cinnamon trees,
And black-flowered vanilla vines.
The white blooming almonds trees.
And the burning pink-pepper bushes.
Soon I reached where the aloe-woods grow black,
and critters make the dark moss their home.
I unsaddled the horse – set it free.
This was my quest to finish alone.
In the pitch of the forest, I found you.
Your sweet love – Shimmering and Elusive.
I took you by the hand and with just one question. . .
βAre we exclusive?β
Click Here to learn more about Layton Exclusif from Parfums de Marly. Read Coco Mademoiselle by Chanel. Β© TheFragranceWriter.com, 2020 except where noted otherwise. All rights reserved.
Mmmmmm. I can literally smell it! Your descriptions are brilliant ππππBeautifully penned and powerful π π π
Never stop writing β€οΈ β€οΈ β€οΈ
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Thanks, I’m blessed by your comments π I’m even starting to draw away from strictly writing about each fragrant note, and even just capture the main story I feel from the fragrance.
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Your welcome, π okay!
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Yes! I like this one Jay π
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OK, real test, have you ever smelled it?!
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No I haven’t. Maybe when the department stores open again I can hang out at the fragrance counter once more ππ
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Oh yes. that’s my favorite place to hang out π
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Shimmering and Elusive…. Beutiful write.
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Sorry for the typo. Beautiful.
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No prob, you can call me Beutiful!
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Not so fast π
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hahaha
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Thanks G!
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My pleasure π
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Take Care. Hope you’re ready for quarantine to start to end!
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Jay, I’ve done so much work from home that honestly I did not notice as much as other people did. The other day when I went to the market I was like ..oh.. yeah.. there is a breeze.. there are people around… wow..
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haha. I have been working every day as an essential worker, so it has not been as hard to me either. I consider myself blessed.
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That’s wonderful. Stay blessed.
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You too!
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Amazing fragrance (/poetry), Jay….”Shimmering and Elusive”…..on top of…”Are we exclusive?”
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Thanks Navin. I always try to tie in the name with the poem if I feel it fits without forcing it. I feel like this is a fragrance you’d like!
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It seems like I’ll end up buying this fragrance to relate it with your beautiful writing….
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Yes, I have to warn though, per ounce it’s one of the most expensive of the market. π And you can’t buy it discount because there’s so many fakes
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Haha…that’s what I also wanted to add as well…you’re gonna make me broke in terms of money…but rich when it comes to this fragrance π
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Hey at least you know you will smell good π When you buy fragrances like this, though, you don’t need to spray a lot of you. So they also last a long time!
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That sounds great…I feel relieved π
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I know the feeling. I usually hustle to get money to buy fragrances so I don’t feel guilty. For example, maximizing my credit card rewards so I can use them to buy the fragrances.
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so creating the win-win situation
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Win-win and smelling good π
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Beautifully written and love the way you describe. It’s just amazingπ
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Thanks Sanjana. Your comments are so kind, they make my day π
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This was a very lovely read β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you thank you π Thanks for stopping by
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The adjectives here are awesome
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Thanks that’s a great compliment! I tried to really expound on the description of some of the notes π
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Sent you an email
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I see it π I’ll try to get it all done after the weekend. Thought you forgot about me π
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ππππno no sorry for the delay.
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π€£π€£ no problem
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