Side Effect (Initio) | Fragrance Poetry

Fragrance Poetry Inspired by Side Effect from Initio.

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Examining every move on our date,
I studied you sitting opposite me.
I had a slice of vanilla-rum cake.
You were content with cinnamon candies.

I now had courage to say how I felt,
But thoughts were like tobacco in my mouth.
My stomach only became more upset
The longer I refused to spit them out.

I knew my words would be strong and shocking,
But I had hoped they would settle sweetly.
“. . .I love You. . .”
But your affection was like your candy.
Before long, it dissolved away from me.

A side effect of false confidences –
Words still linger in the back of your mouth.
But don’t think that I need condolences.
Because now I’m fearless to speak my heart!

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Author: Jay Bleu

“I started writing poetry but fell in love with fragrances. So this is my new blend. . .”

70 thoughts on “Side Effect (Initio) | Fragrance Poetry”

  1. Wowwww!!! How??? I really do not know what to say! This is such a beauty!😍😍

    How did I miss reading this?

    This took my heart away –

    “I now had courage to say how I felt,
    But thoughts were like tobacco in my mouth.
    My stomach only became more upset
    The longer I refused to spit them out.”

    Here’s something that I had to share with you😊😊 – https://theboldvibe.com/50-followers/

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    1. haha it just came out this morning. hahaha Thanks. Have you ever been in a situation where you felt like those lines?

      Woohoo! Congrats!!! This is a great start to your blog. It’s only a matter of time until you have more followers than me B-)

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      1. Hehehe..Yes, of course, I have been.😁

        Thank you, Ayee-Jay!😊 Well, by the time I reach the number of followers you have, I would want you to reach two times the followers you have now.

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      1. Smells good seriously I am dying of laughter here😂😂😂😂😂😂 btw what if this was like a 7 year old kiddo and u just said that and they would be like what r u saying what would u do the explAin stuff too them bye how do u even know I am big enough to understand this??😉😉😉😉 lol I am laughing so much like so much😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂Like in every sentence u use lol. It should be your fav. word. Isn’t it?? Lol man😂😂😂😂

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    1. Haha. So you are usually just into the nice and clean scent? Avoiding all negative smells? Fragrances not just smell nice but also can add a level of aromatherapy to your life.

      That podcast looks really interesting. I’m going to have to check it out in a little while B-)

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      1. No not at all. I just don’t usually wear more than lotion. Either vanilla or fruit usually. I love smells though. Petrichor and cut grass. Lilac. Peony. Bread baking. Bacon. Sheets in the sun. Silage. Manure. Cherry pipe tobacco. Gunpowder. Sweat. 🙂 haha

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      2. Every brand is different so you can’t just say no to a “note.” I have a rose and incense fragrance that I LOVE. But for the better notes, you usually have to spend quite a bit more $$ B-(

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  2. You’re surprising me every single time….with your beautiful & fragrant lines….that give me this different & interesting vibe….where I wish to jump deep & steep from the crazy heights….from there, I disappear when I spread my wings….to fly in this beautiful & open sky

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    1. Thanks Navin, you always build me up as such a great poet! Not sure it’s my words inspiring you or if I’m just passing on the vibes of the fragrance. I’d like to think the latter because that’d mean I’m a really good writer to transfer those vibes. Your lines are great B-)

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