Fragrance Poetry Inspired by Atomic Rose from Initio.
This girls atomic,
But in a beautiful way;
Sweet – in an eclectic way.
Wash over me.
Classic like a single stem rose.
But every rose has its thorns.
Other times she’s a soft pink blanket
Warmly Wrapping around me
Fresh with fabric softener.
She’s pink –
Like a drink for indigestion.
But she doesn’t calm any upset stomachs.
She’s electric –
Like a soft blanket made for cuddling,
But shocks you when you first touch it. . .
They say every rose has its thorn,
But this girl’s atomic!
Every rose is classic and beautiful.
After the thorns, you’ll find yourself
Caressed in soft pedals.
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Brilliant piece as always. I love…love the fabric softener- static cling imagery. Enjoyable reading. Keep on blessing the poetic air with your wonderful aromatherapy keepsakes. Thank you.😊
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Thanks, you’re making my DAY Suzette! 😎
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Me pleasure 😊
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A cyclical effect with this perfume?
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Ya, in a way, because it dances around a classic, soft rose vibe and then an atomic/electric vibe. Hard to explain B-)
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Another beautiful poem from you Jay. And you always have the most interesting photo that goes along with your piece! 💛💛💛
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haha thank you! I can’t take credit for the photo – I guess I just have good taste in choosing them B-)
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You do! 😊💛
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Thanks :D:D
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You did justice for the fragrance 👍
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Thanks my friend 😎 how are you?
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I am good good good. 🙂😊
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Wow triple good 😎😎😎
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😂
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Comes across as a fragrance for the modern woman, oozing youthfulness, a young fragrance, full of insatiable energy.
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I would say yes, that’s exactly what it is 😎
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Compliments to the poet. And for me hitting the nail on the head🤗
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haha, ya, you felt it write! B-) Good Job
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Your website is always fragrant !!
And this one pink electric girl is one big atom !!!
pink for indigestion, pink for cuddling, static electricity .. loved it ❤
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Thanks! It really smells pink, too! B-)
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Pink hearts for you then 💞💞💞💞💞
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haha awwww yay 😀
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Yayyy !! 💞💞
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I LOVE this poem!! It made me curious! Some of my favorite words mashed together💖🍨🍥🦄
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I think this one would smell really nice on you!
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AMAZING WORK
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thanks Nancy, glad you found me!
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This one is fun! Whimsical!
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Thanks! I didn’t want to make this one too serious!
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Welcome. I think it’s perfect the way it is.
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Thanks! I try not to force the same personality on every poem B-) Thanks for the compliment
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😂👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼💕
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😎😎😎 glad you can relate
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There was a bit of glee in this poem… i felt it. This poem was automatic pink pop!! 💝🕊✌🏼 Anyhow, in a sad mood actually. 🌊💙💙
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You felt the poem spot on. But what’s wrong
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