
I fell into your rose garden.
The green-limb snakes wrapped around my arms
with their thorny fangs digging deep
No, I couldn’t break free.
Red drops like petals dripped.
You concealed yourself under the incense cloud
and made your bed in my turmoil.
I love you.
Read Kobraa. Β© TheFragranceWriter.com 2020, except where noted otherwise. All rights reserved.
Whoa π³ Jay! π
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haha. Whoa?? B-)
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Strong poem… it floored me. π I was knocked over and started laughing… not in a bad way or at you. Just something hidden in my psyche. Yeah, a bit crazy if you saw me. Is this rude? Sorry. Its not coming across right. Im bad. Be good. π₯π
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I agree with yassy… its a beautifully strong and gorgeous poem. Im amazed at myself… raw and unedited. Ugh. ππ’
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It’s slightly edited but thank you π π π
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hahaha no….. I laugh at weird times, too. Do we just have a twisted humor?? ππ
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Whoa whoa awesomely beautiful, sensational !!!
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Woowowowo Yassy… I am still trying to catch up to your amazing skills!! B-)
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Donβt be so modest , Bleu. You are good ππ
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Thanks sassy lassy
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Welcome, Mango Lassie..
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πππ Happy you’re still doing well
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Yup π
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Nice π
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Thanks Phoenix B-)
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Rossy de Palma Eau de Protection?
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No although that one seems really cool B-) This is one I already wrote about before… I think I am going to stop making direct references to fragrances when I write about them. Gives me a little more freedom B-)
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All the freedom! And maybe some amusement when readers try to guess? π
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haha. mmm you are one of the very few who I think will have a shot at guessing. Since most of these are ones no one’s heard of unless fragrance is their hobby B-)
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Nice one !
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Gee Thanks B-)
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Mysterious! Love it!
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Mysterious is a good thing B-)
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Wow Jay! Full of mystery aye? Love it. it’s beautifully written.
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Thanks Sanjana from land down under
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Felt like a rollercoaster ride. Marvellous writing π
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hmm…. that my goal… to take the reader for a ride B-)
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I love this one. I think the last part of it is perfect. Reminds me of my mind. He
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haha yes. I tried to make it real and relatable. I think we often have that dichotomy in our mind. Mind vs feelings. he
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No he lol
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Like a beautiful dream!
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Thanks so much bejamin!
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Welcome!
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Hauntingly beautiful! The visual is giving me lots of odd thoughts. π
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haha, like?
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Speechless, the passion and the sweet agony…and then the perfect
I love you
Too!
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Thanks. I’m touched you like it so much B-)
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Beautiful poem, Jay!
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Thanks! Thanks for stopping by!
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