My love, you’re a white floral garden.
Yes, plain and simple like a painted picture.
Yet I’d study and stare at such a fixture.
And when we kiss, your lips are wet and rich,
Just like honey – simple… sweet… velvety…
Yet tasting of the highest complexity.
When I hear your voice, it’s more than a song
Composed of the grandest melody –
Yet contained in a simple sigh – like unsaid poetry. . .
More about the Perfume by Dusita, Melodie de L’Amour. More Poetry from The Fragrance Writer, Rhinoceros. Poetry © TheFragranceWriter.com 2021.
Damn you….well written…..”Yet contained in a simple sigh – like unsaid poetry. . .”….what can I say more….
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to be “damned” by such a “curse” B-)
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Your writings are amazing, Jay 😎
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Thanks as always 😎
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Oooh, beautiful imagery. That last line..exquisite 👍👍❤
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Thanks Suzette. How can it be both a melody and a sigh?
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Exactly how poetry is!
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Right! B-)
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❤👍
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You captured the scent soooo well!!!!
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Thanks. I really hope I can do it justice
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Exquisite from the first word till the last. 💖💖
Re reading it
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Thanks Sona!!!!
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Yet contained in a simple sigh – like unsaid poetry. . .
So beautiful!!!!
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THANKS!
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The use of the ktetic form at the beginning of the poem, -my love- made the song an instant hit
Top of the charts poetry….a moving melody.
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Thanks! I just wanted to make it feel more personalized. I wan’t do at least some in French, but wasn’t sure I could give it proper form B-)
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You are welcome and I’m certain the french pattern will come
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Haha I’m not sure about that
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Let’s wait and see
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Haha ok
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Awesome: “Unsaid poetry”
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For the Perfumes thats a Melody of Love
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